Address annevk comments

Author: meacer

fetch.bs

@@ -2162,7 +2162,7 @@ Unless stated otherwise, it is false.
 
 <p class=note>This flag is for exclusive use by HTTPS Upgrading algorithm.
 
-<p>A <a for=/>request</a> has an associated <dfn export for=request>HTTPS upgrade fallback URL</dfn>
+<p>A <a for=/>request</a> has an associated <dfn export for=request>HTTPS upgrade fallback URL</dfn>,
 which is a <a for=/>URL</a>. It is a copy of the <a for=/>request</a>'s original
 <a for=request>URL</a> before <a for=/>request</a> is <a href="#https-upgrades-upgrade">optionally
 upgraded to HTTPS</a>. Unless stated otherwise, it is unset.
@@ -3276,20 +3276,21 @@ through TLS using ALPN. The protocol cannot be spoofed through HTTP requests in
 </ol>
 </div>
 
+
 <h3 id=https-upgrades>HTTPS upgrading</h3>
 
-<p>User agents may optionally upgrade requests with URLs that are not <a>potentially trustworthy
-URLs</a> to attempt to fetch them over <a>potentially trustworthy URLs</a>. If an upgraded request
-fails with a network error, it is retried over the original URL.
+<p>User agents may optionally upgrade requests with URLs that are not
+<a>potentially trustworthy URLs</a> to attempt to fetch them over
+<a>potentially trustworthy URLs</a>. If an upgraded request fails with a network error, it is
+retried over the original URL.
 
 <p>The HTTPS upgrading algorithm consists of <a>upgrade an HTTP request</a> and <a>HTTPS upgrade
 fallback</a> algorithms.
 
 <div algorithm>
 <h4 id=https-upgrades-upgrade>HTTPS upgrade algorithm</h4>
 
-<p>To <dfn>upgrade an HTTP request</dfn> given a <a for=/>request</a> <var>request</var>, run these
-steps:
+<p>To <dfn>upgrade an HTTP request</dfn> given a <a for=/>request</a> <var>request</var>:
 
 <ol>
  <li>
@@ -3319,7 +3320,8 @@ steps:
 
   <p class=note>This is a fallback request that shouldn't be upgraded again.
 
- <li><p>Otherwise, set the following fields:
+ <li>
+  <p>Otherwise, set the following fields:
   <ul>
    <li><p>Set <a for=request>HTTPS upgrade fallback URL</a> to <var>request</var>'s
    <a for="request">URL</a>.
@@ -3337,7 +3339,7 @@ steps:
 <h4 id=https-upgrades-fallback>Fallback algorithm</h4>
 
 <p>To run <dfn>HTTPS upgrade fallback</dfn> given a <a for=/>request</a> <var>request</var> and
-<a for=/>response</a> <var>response</var>, run these steps:
+<a for=/>response</a> <var>response</var>:
 
 <ol>
  <li><p>If <var>request</var>'s <a for=request>is HTTPS upgrade</a> is not set, return
@@ -3355,13 +3357,11 @@ steps:
   </ol>
 
  <li>
- <p>Return <var>response</var>.
- <p class=note>This means the upgrade was successful.
+  <p>Return <var>response</var>.
+  <p class=note>This means the upgrade was successful.
 
 </ol>
-
-<p class=note>
-User agents can implement a fast-fallback path by canceling slow fetches on upgraded
+<p class=note>User agents can implement a fast-fallback path by canceling slow fetches on upgraded
 requests, in order to quickly initiate a fallback http load.
 
 </div>
@@ -4562,12 +4562,12 @@ steps:
  <li><p><a>Upgrade <var>request</var> to a potentially trustworthy URL, if appropriate</a>.
 
  <li>
-  <p>Optionally, run <a>upgrade an HTTP request</a> algorithm on <var>request</var>, if appropriate</a>.
+  <p>Optionally, run <a>upgrade an HTTP request</a> algorithm on <var>request</var>.
 
   <p class=note>HTTPS upgrading only applies to requests with <a>HTTP(S) scheme</a>s, but it's done
-  in <a>main fetch</a> instead of <a>HTTP fetch</a> to ensure that <a>upgrade a mixed content
-  <var>request</var> to a potentially trustworthy URL, if appropriate</a> step runs next and applies
-  to the upgraded request.
+  in <a>main fetch</a> instead of <a>HTTP fetch</a> to ensure that
+  <a>upgrade a mixed content <var>request</var> to a potentially trustworthy URL, if appropriate</a>
+  step runs next and applies to the upgraded request.
 
  <li><p><a>Upgrade a mixed content <var>request</var> to a potentially trustworthy URL, if appropriate</a>.
 
@@ -5277,7 +5277,7 @@ these steps:
      <a>filtered response</a>; otherwise to <var>response</var>'s
      <a for="filtered response">internal response</a>.
 
-     <li><p>If <var>response</var>'s <a for=response>type</a> is "<code>error</code>" then
+     <li><p>If <var>response</var>'s <a for=response>type</a> is "<code>error</code>", then
      return the result of running <a>HTTPS upgrade fallback</a> given <var>request</var>
      and a <a>network error</a>.
 
@@ -5373,8 +5373,8 @@ these steps:
   have different embedder policies.
 
  <li>If <var>request</var>'s <a for=request>is HTTPS upgrade</a> is set, set <var>response</var> and
-  <var>internalResponse</var> to the result of running
-  <a>HTTPS upgrade fallback</a> given <var>request</var> and <var>response</var>.
+  <var>internalResponse</var> to the result of running <a>HTTPS upgrade fallback</a> given
+  <var>request</var> and <var>response</var>.
 
  <li>
   <p>If <var>internalResponse</var>'s <a for=response>status</a> is a <a>redirect status</a>: