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‎state/wwwpublic/tips-erda.dk.html‎

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<div class="tips-entries accordion col-lg-12">
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<h4 class="staticpage">Home and Web Site Apps</h4>
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<h4 class="staticpage">Home and Website Apps</h4>
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On your <a href="setup.py?topic=home">Home page</a> you can select
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which site Apps you want to have at hand in the navigation menu on
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https://status.erda.dk</a>?<br/>
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There we announce planned downtime e.g. for maintenance and any other
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issues affecting site or service availability. A brief overview of the
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current situation is always visible through the little colored status
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icon at the bottom right on your ERDA web pages. You can also click it
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for further details.<br/>
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Importantly the status page runs on a separate system, so it generally
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remains available even when ERDA itself is down.
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current situation is always visible when logged in. You can see it as
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the little colored status icon at the bottom right on your ERDA web
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pages. You can also click that colored icon to view further
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details.<br/>
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Importantly the status page at status.erda.dk runs on a separate
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system, so it generally remains available even if ERDA itself is
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unavailable.
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<div class="tips-entry">
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Do you worry about your ERDA account security? ERDA provides optional
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2FA on all services to significantly reduce the risk of account abuse
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even if someone gets hold of your password. Due to general security
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considerations and in particular the increase in phishing attacks we
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considerations and in particular the increase in phishing attacks, we
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recommend enabling it if you haven't already done so. It's done by
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going through the little
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A common way of distributing files e.g. for courses or workshops is by
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means of making one or more folders with material and creating
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read-only sharelinks on them. The participants can then select a
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folder on ther Files page and use Share Link &rarr; Import from the
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folder on their Files page and use Share Link &rarr; Import from the
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right-click menu to easily fetch their own copy directly - without
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downloading to their own computer first. This is particularly
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convenient for Jupyter notebooks to be used in exercises.
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<h4 class="staticpage">Home og web site Apps</h4>
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<h4 class="staticpage">Home og website Apps</h4>
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På din <a href="setup.py?topic=home">Home-side</a> kan du vælge hvilke
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site Apps du vil have let tilgængelige i navigations-menuen til

‎state/wwwpublic/tips-migrid.org.html‎

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<h4 class="staticpage">Home and Website Apps</h4>
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On your <a href="setup.py?topic=home">Home page</a> you can select
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which site Apps you want to have at hand in the navigation menu on
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https://status.erda.dk</a>?<br/>
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There we announce planned downtime e.g. for maintenance and any other
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issues affecting site or service availability. A brief overview of the
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current situation is always visible through the little colored status
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icon at the bottom right on your MiGrid web pages. You can also click it
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for further details.<br/>
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Importantly the status page runs on a separate system, so it generally
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remains available even when MiGrid itself is down.
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current situation is always visible when logged in. You can see it as
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the little colored status icon at the bottom right on your MiGrid web pages. You can also click it
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pages. You can also click that colored icon to view further
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details.<br/>
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Importantly the status page at status.erda.dk runs on a separate
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system, so it generally remains available even if MiGrid itself is
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unavailable.
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</p>
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</div>
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<div class="tips-entry">
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Do you worry about your MiGrid account security? MiGrid provides optional
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2FA on all services to significantly reduce the risk of account abuse
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even if someone gets hold of your password. Due to general security
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considerations and in particular the increase in phishing attacks we
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considerations and in particular the increase in phishing attacks, we
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recommend enabling it if you haven't already done so. It's done by
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<a href="setup.py?topic=twofactor" target="_blank">
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A common way of distributing files e.g. for courses or workshops is by
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read-only sharelinks on them. The participants can then select a
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folder on ther Files page and use Share Link &rarr; Import from the
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folder on their Files page and use Share Link &rarr; Import from the
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right-click menu to easily fetch their own copy directly - without
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downloading to their own computer first. This is particularly
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convenient for Jupyter notebooks to be used in exercises.

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