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Co-authored-by: Joseph Heck <j_heck@apple.com>

Author: ktoso

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@@ -564,7 +564,7 @@ priyambada:
   name: Priyambada Roul
   email: priyaroul99@gmail.com
   github: roulpriya
-  about: Priyambada is a software developer based in Bangalore, working at Cashfree Payments, a leading payment processor in India. Shen she's not coding, she enjoys Bharatanatyam dance, painting, sculpting with clay, and experimenting with side projects on GitHub.
+  about: Priyambada is a software developer based in Bangalore, working at Cashfree Payments, a leading payment processor in India. When she's not coding, she enjoys Bharatanatyam dance, painting, sculpting with clay, and experimenting with side projects on GitHub.
 heckj:
   name: Joe Heck
   email: j_heck@apple.com

_posts/2025-11-NN-swift-gsoc-2025-highlight-1-vscode-swiftly.md

@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ author: [ktoso, priyambada]
 category: "Community"
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-Another year of successful Swift participation in [Google Summer of Code](https://summerofcode.withgoogle.com) 2025 came to an end recently, and this year we'd like to shine some light on the projects and work acomplished during the summer!
+Another year of successful Swift participation in [Google Summer of Code](https://summerofcode.withgoogle.com) 2025 came to an end recently, and this year we'd like to shine some light on the projects and work accomplished during the summer!
 
 Summer of Code is an annual program, organized by Google, which provides hands-on experience for newcomers contributing
 to open source projects. Participants usually are students, but do not have to be.
@@ -20,7 +20,7 @@ You can navigate between the posts using these convenient links:
 - [Improve the display of documentation during code completion in SourceKit-LSP](2025-11-NN-swift-gsoc-2025-highlight-3-vscode-swift-lsp-documentation.md)
 - [Improved Console Output for Swift Testing](2025-11-NN-swift-gsoc-2025-highlight-4-swift-testing-output.md)
 
-What follows, is a shortened writeup about their project and experience by the GSoC contributors. 
+What follows is a shortened writeup about their project and experience by the GSoC contributors. 
 If you'd like to learn more, please check out the full version of their posts on the Swift forums (linked below)!
 
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@@ -70,7 +70,7 @@ This experience is already shipping in the latest update of the VS Code extensio
 
 * Making a VS Code extension. While I have experience with TypeScript from web development, the VS Code extension API and its development workflow are different from what I'm used to.
 * I understood the structure and distribution of Swift toolchains, as well as how different versions can coexist on the same system using symlinks, environment variables, and PATH manipulation, across both macOS and Linux.
-* The extension spawns Swiftly processes and reads their JSON output streams in real-time. This involved learning about IPC mechanisms, stdin/stdout buffering and process lifecycle management.
+* The extension spawns Swiftly processes and reads their JSON output streams in real-time. This involved learning about IPC mechanisms, stdin/stdout buffering, and process lifecycle management.
 
 Want to see what we built? Check out the repositories:
 
@@ -79,7 +79,7 @@ Want to see what we built? Check out the repositories:
 
 I have linked all pull requests and technical details in my **[detailed project report](https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Mnb9ybmVkpL6pAgrpMbSg6EV3owA2rz_FgltvAXdnUE/edit?tab=t.0)**, which provides an in-depth look into the specific changes.
 
-This GSoC experience has been transformative. I came in as someone intimidated by large codebases, and I'm leaving with the confidence to tackle complex, multi-tool integrations. I'm excited to continue contributing to Swift community!
+This GSoC experience has been transformative. I came in as someone intimidated by large codebases, and I'm leaving with the confidence to tackle complex, multi-tool integrations. I'm excited to continue contributing to the Swift community!
 
 
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