initial edits to testing and debugging

Author: rchinn1

src/getting-started/06-testing-debugging.md

@@ -19,11 +19,11 @@ The Source Debugger is a real-time tool that helps you confirm that API calls ma
 
 ![Debugger view](/docs/connections/sources/images/debugger_view.png)
 
-The Debugger is separate from your workspace's data pipeline and is not an exhaustive view of all the events ever sent to your Segment workspace. The Debugger only shows a sample of the events that the Source receives in real time, with a cap of 500 events. The Debugger is a great way to test specific parts of your implementation to validate that events are being fired successfully and arriving to your Source.
+The Debugger is separate from your workspace's data pipeline and is not an exhaustive view of all the events ever sent to your Segment workspace. The Debugger only shows a sample of the events that the source receives in real time, with a cap of 500 events. The Debugger is a great way to test specific parts of your implementation to validate that events are being fired successfully and arriving to your source.
 
 To see a more complete view of all your events, we recommend that you set up either a [warehouse](/docs/connections/storage/warehouses/) or an [S3 destination](/docs/connections/storage/catalog/amazon-s3/).
 
-The Debugger shows a live stream of sampled events arriving into the Source, but you can also pause the stream from displaying new events by toggling "Live" to "Pause". Events continue to arrive to your Source while you Pause the stream.
+The Debugger shows a live stream of sampled events arriving into the source, but you can also pause the stream from displaying new events by toggling "Live" to "Pause". Events continue to arrive to your source while you pause the stream.
 
 You can search in the Debugger to find a specific payload using any information you know is available in the event's raw payload. You can also use advanced search options to limit the results to a specific event.
 
@@ -48,12 +48,12 @@ Here is an example of what the Event Delivery tool looks like:
 ![Event Delivery tool example](/docs/connections/images/edelivery_jXaoBuF6.png)
 
 
-Event Delivery is most useful when: 
+Event Delivery is most useful: 
 
 - **When data seems to be missing in your destination.**
-  For example, you have Google Analytics set up as a destination and your recent data looks incomplete
+  For example, you have Google Analytics set up as a destination and your recent data looks incomplete.
 - **When setting up a destination for the first time.** 
-  For example, you are connecting Google Analytics to your Node Source. Once you've entered your credentials and turned the destination on, you can use this feature to see whether events are successfully making it to GA in near realtime. 
+  For example, you are connecting Google Analytics to your Node source. Once you've entered your credentials and turned the destination on, you can use this feature to see whether events are successfully making it to GA in near realtime. 
 
 You can access the Event Delivery tool from the destination **Settings** tab in any supported destination.
 
@@ -67,19 +67,19 @@ You can access the Event Delivery tool from the destination **Settings** tab in
 
 The UI shows three parts that report on Segment's ability to deliver your source data: Key Metrics, Error Details, and Delivery Trends.
 
-**Before you begin,** select a time period from the drop down menu at the right. The Event Delivery display updates to show only information about your selected time period.
+Before you begin, select a time period from the drop-down menu. The Event Delivery display updates to show only data for that period.
 
 ![Select a time period from the dropdown menu](/docs/connections/images/edelivery_Qs4r85sc.png)
 
 #### Key metrics
 
 This panel displays quantitative information about the destination's data flow:
 
-- **Delivered:** The number of messages Segment successfully delivered to the destination in the selected time period.
+- **Delivered**: The number of messages Segment successfully delivered to the destination in the selected time period.
 
-- **Not Delivered:** The number of messages Segment was unable to deliver. If this number is greater than zero, the reasons for these failures appear in the errors table below. 
+- **Not Delivered**: The number of messages Segment was unable to deliver. If this number is greater than zero, the reasons for failure will appear in the [Error details table](#error-details). 
 
-- **P95 Latency:** The time it takes for Segment to deliver the slowest 5% of your data (known as P95 latency). The latency reported is end-to-end: from the event being received through the Segment API, to the event being delivered to partner API. This helps tell you if there is a delay in your data pipeline, and how severe it is.
+- **P95 Latency**: The time it takes for Segment to deliver the slowest 5% of your data (known as P95 latency). The latency reported is end-to-end: from the event being received through the Segment API, to the event being delivered to partner API. This helps tell you if there is a delay in your data pipeline, and how severe it is.
 
 #### Error details
 
@@ -94,29 +94,22 @@ The Error Details view gives you as much information as possible to help you res
 
 This view includes: 
 
-- **Description**
-  The event delivery UI provides a human-friendly summary of the error, based on the payload Segment received back from the partner.
-- **Actions**
-  These are actions you can take, based on what Segment knows about the issue. 
-- **More Info**
-  Links to any documentation that might be helpful to you. 
-- **Sample payloads**
-  To help you debug, Segment provides sample payloads from every step of the data's journey:
-  - **You Sent** - the data you sent to Segment's API.
+- **Description**: The event delivery UI provides a human-friendly summary of the error, based on the payload Segment received back from the partner.
+- **Actions**: These are actions you can take, based on what Segment knows about the issue. 
+- **More Info**: Links to any documentation that might be helpful to you. 
+- **Sample payloads**: To help you debug, Segment provides sample payloads from every step of the data's journey.
+  - **You Sent**: The data you sent to Segment's API.
+  - **Request to Destination**: The request Segment made to the Partner API. This payload will likely be different from what you sent it because Segment is mapping your event to the partner's spec to ensure the message is successfully delivered. 
+  - **Response from Destination**: The response Segment received from the Partner API. This will have the raw partner error. If you need to troubleshoot an issue with a Partner's Success team, this is usually something they'll want to see. 
 
-  - **Request to Destination** - the request Segment made to the Partner API. This payload will likely be different from what you sent it because Segment is mapping your event to the partner's spec to ensure the message is successfully delivered. 
-
-  - **Response from Destination** - the response Segment received from the Partner API. This will have the raw partner error. If you need to troubleshoot an issue with a Partner's Success team, this is usually something they'll want to see. 
-
-View Segment's list of [Integration Error Codes](/docs/connections/integration_error_codes/) for more information about what might cause an error.
+View Segment's list of [Integration Error Codes](/docs/connections/integration_error_codes/) for more details.
 
 ### Trends
 
-When debugging, it's helpful to see when issues start, stop and how they trend over time. 
+When debugging, it's helpful to see when issues start, stop, and how they trend over time. 
 
 The Event Delivery view shows a graph with the following information:
 - **Delivered**: The number of events that were successfully delivered in the time period you selected. 
-
 - **Not delivered**: The number of events that were not successfully delivered in the time period you selected. 
 
 The Latency view shows the end-to-end P95 latency during the time period you selected.