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Author: pwseg

src/unify/profiles-sync/profiles-sync-setup/index.md

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-On this page, you’ll learn how to set up Profiles Sync, enable historical backfill, and adjust settings for warehouses that you’ve connected to Profiles Sync.
+On this page, you’ll learn how to set up Profiles Sync, turn on historical backfill, and adjust settings for warehouses connected to Profiles Sync.
 
-## Initially Setting up Profiles Sync
+## Set up Profiles Sync
 
 > info "Identity Resolution setup"
 > To use Profiles Sync, you must first set up [Identity Resolution](/docs/unify/identity-resolution/).
 
-To set up Profiles Sync, first create a warehouse, then connect the warehouse within the Segment app.
+To set up Profiles Sync, first create a warehouse, then connect the warehouse in Segment.
 
 Before you begin, prepare for setup with these tips:
 
-- To connect your warehouse to Segment, you must have read and write permissions with the warehouse Destination you choose.
-- During step 2, you’ll copy credentials between Segment and your warehouse destination. To streamline setup, open your Segment workspace in one browser tab and open another with your warehouse account.
+- To connect your warehouse to Segment, you must have read and write permissions for the warehouse destination you choose.
+- During Step 2 of setup, you’ll copy credentials between Segment and your warehouse destination. To streamline the process, open your Segment workspace in one browser tab and your warehouse account in another.
 - Make sure to copy any IP addresses Segment asks you to allowlist in your warehouse destination.
 
 ### Step 1: Select a warehouse