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Author: Chris Cho

docs/quick-start.txt

@@ -45,6 +45,12 @@ required) MongoDB Atlas deployment by following the steps in this guide.
 Follow the steps in this guide to create a sample Laravel web application
 that connects to a MongoDB deployment.
 
+.. tip::
+
+   You can download the complete web application project by cloning the
+   `laravel-quickstart <https://github.com/mongodb-university/laravel-quickstart>`__
+   GitHub repository.
+
 .. button:: Next: Download and Install
    :uri: /quick-start/download-and-install/
 

docs/quick-start/configure-mongodb.txt

@@ -16,9 +16,9 @@ Configure Your MongoDB Connection
 
    .. step:: Set the Connection String in the Database Configuration
 
-      Navigate to the ``config`` directory from your application root directory.
-      Open the ``database.php`` file and set the default database connection
-      to ``mongodb`` as shown in the following line:
+      Open the ``database.php`` file in the ``config`` directory and
+      set the default database connection to ``mongodb`` as shown
+      in the following line:
 
       .. code-block:: php
 
@@ -27,7 +27,7 @@ Configure Your MongoDB Connection
       Add the following highlighted ``mongodb`` entry to the ``connections`` array
       in the same file. Replace the ``<connection string>`` placeholder with the
       connection string that you copied from the :ref:`laravel-quick-start-connection-string`
-      step of this guide.
+      step in the following code example:
 
       .. code-block:: php
          :emphasize-lines: 2-6
@@ -41,12 +41,10 @@ Configure Your MongoDB Connection
 
          // ...
 
-
       .. step:: Add the Laravel MongoDB Provider
 
-
-         From the ``config`` directory, open the ``app.php`` file and add
-         the following entry into the ``providers`` array:
+         Open the ``app.php`` in the ``config`` directory and
+         add the following entry into the ``providers`` array:
 
          .. code-block::
 

docs/quick-start/create-a-connection-string.txt

@@ -13,7 +13,9 @@ The connection string includes the hostname or IP address and
 port of your deployment, the authentication mechanism, user credentials
 when applicable, and connection options.
 
-To connect to an instance or deployment not hosted on Atlas, see TODO
+To connect to an instance or deployment not hosted on Atlas, see the
+:manual:`Connection Strings </reference/connection-string/>` in the Server
+manual.
 
 .. procedure::
    :style: connected

docs/quick-start/next-steps.txt

@@ -22,6 +22,10 @@ In this tutorial, you created a Laravel web application that uses the
 of a query, and write data to a MongoDB deployment hosted on
 MongoDB Atlas.
 
+You can download the web application project by cloning the
+`laravel-quickstart <https://github.com/mongodb-university/laravel-quickstart>`__
+GitHub repository.
+
 Learn more about {+odm-short+} features from the following resources:
 
 - :ref:`laravel-eloquent-models`: use Eloquent model classes to work

docs/quick-start/view-data.txt

@@ -16,9 +16,10 @@ View Sample MongoDB Data
 
    .. step:: Create a Sample Model and Controller
 
-      Create a model called ``Movie`` to access data from the sample ``movies``
-      collection in your MongoDB databse. You can create the model with a
-      corresponding resource controller by running the following command:
+      Create a model called ``Movie`` to represent data from the sample
+      ``movies`` collection in your MongoDB database. You can create the
+      model with a corresponding resource controller by running the
+      following command:
 
       .. code-block:: bash
 
@@ -36,13 +37,12 @@ View Sample MongoDB Data
 
    .. step:: Edit the Model to use {+odm-short+}
 
-      Navigate to the ``app/Models`` directory and open the ``Movie.php`` file.
-      Edit the following information in the file:
+      Open the ``Movie.php`` model in your ``app/Models`` directory and
+      make the following edits:
 
       - Replace the ``Illuminate\Database\Eloquent\Model`` import with ``MongoDB\Laravel\Eloquent\Model``
       - Specify ``mongodb`` in the ``$connection`` field
 
-
       Your ``Movie.php`` file should contain the following code:
 
        .. code-block:: php
@@ -55,14 +55,14 @@ View Sample MongoDB Data
 
             class Movie extends Model
             {
-               protected $connection = 'mongodb';
+                protected $connection = 'mongodb';
             }
 
    .. step:: Add a Controller Function
 
-      Navigate to the ``app/Http/Controllers`` directory and open the
-      ``MovieController.php`` file. Replace the ``show()`` function
-      with the following code to retrieve results that match a
+      Open the ``MovieController.php`` file in your ``app/Http/Controllers``
+      directory. Replace the ``show()`` function with the
+      following code to retrieve results that match a
       database query and render it in the view:
 
       .. code-block:: php
@@ -80,7 +80,7 @@ View Sample MongoDB Data
 
    .. step:: Add a Web Route
 
-      Navigate to the ``routes`` directory and open the ``web.php`` file.
+      Open the ``web.php`` file in the ``routes`` directory.
       Add an import for the ``MovieController`` and a route called
      ``browse_movies`` as shown in the following code:
 
@@ -95,8 +95,8 @@ View Sample MongoDB Data
 
    .. step:: Generate a View
 
-      Navigate to the application root directory and run the following
-      command to create a view that displays movie data:
+      Run the following command from the application root directory
+      to create a view that displays movie data:
 
       .. code-block:: bash
 
@@ -107,9 +107,8 @@ View Sample MongoDB Data
 
          INFO  View [resources/views/browse_movie.blade.php] created successfully.
 
-     Navigate to the ``resources/views`` directory and open the
-     ``browse_movie.blade.php`` file. Replace the contents with the
-     following code:
+     Open the ``browse_movie.blade.php`` view file in the ``resources/views``
+     directory. Replace the contents with the following code:
 
      .. code-block:: bash
 
@@ -139,7 +138,7 @@ View Sample MongoDB Data
 
   .. step:: Start your Laravel Application
 
-      Navigate to the application root directory and run the following command
+      Run the following command from the application root directory
       to start your PHP built-in web server:
 
       .. code-block:: bash
@@ -158,7 +157,7 @@ View Sample MongoDB Data
   .. step:: View the Movie Data
 
      Open http://127.0.0.1:8000/browse_movies in your web browser. If it runs
-     successuflly, you should see a list of movies and details about each of them.
+     successfully, you should see a list of movies and details about each of them.
 
      .. tip::
 

docs/quick-start/write-data.txt

@@ -49,9 +49,9 @@ Post an API Request to Write Data
    .. step:: Update the Movie Model
 
       Add the movie detail fields to the ``$fillable`` array
-      of the ``Movie`` model.
-      Update the ``Movie`` class at ``app/Models/Movie.php``
-
+      of the ``Movie`` model. After adding them, the ``Movie``
+      class at ``app/Models/Movie.php`` should contain the
+      following code:
 
       .. code-block:: php
          :emphasize-lines: 4