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Author: Chris Cho

docs/quick-start/configure-mongodb.txt

@@ -50,6 +50,9 @@ Configure Your MongoDB Connection
 
          MongoDB\Laravel\MongoDBServiceProvider::class,
 
+After completing these steps, your Laravel web application is ready to
+connect to MongoDB.
+
 .. include:: /includes/quick-start/troubleshoot.rst
 
 .. button:: Next: View Sample MongoDB Data

docs/quick-start/create-a-deployment.txt

@@ -22,9 +22,8 @@ your MongoDB database in the cloud.
       After you create your database user, save that user's
       username and password to a safe location for use in an upcoming step.
 
-After you complete these steps, you have a new free tier MongoDB
-deployment on Atlas, database user credentials, and sample data loaded
-into your database.
+After completing these steps, you have a new free tier MongoDB deployment on
+Atlas, database user credentials, and sample data loaded into your database.
 
 .. note::
 

docs/quick-start/download-and-install.txt

@@ -50,8 +50,7 @@ to a Laravel web application.
 
          composer global require laravel/installer
 
-      When the installation completes, you should see the
-      following output:
+      When the installation completes, you should see the following output:
 
       .. code-block:: none
          :copyable: false
@@ -67,8 +66,7 @@ to a Laravel web application.
 
          laravel new {+quickstart-app-name+}
 
-      When the installation completes, you should see the
-      following output:
+      When the installation completes, you should see the following output:
 
       .. code-block:: none
          :copyable: false
@@ -83,7 +81,7 @@ to a Laravel web application.
    .. step:: Add a Laravel Application Encryption Key
 
       Run the following command to add the Laravel application encryption
-      key which is required to encrypt cookies:
+      key, which is required to encrypt cookies:
 
       .. code-block:: bash
 
@@ -112,8 +110,8 @@ to a Laravel web application.
 
          "mongodb/laravel-mongodb": "^{+package-version+}"
 
-      After you complete these steps, you should have a new Laravel project
-      with the {+odm-short+} dependencies installed.
+      After completing these steps, you have a new Laravel project with the
+      {+odm-short+} dependencies installed.
 
 .. include:: /includes/quick-start/troubleshoot.rst
 

docs/quick-start/view-data.txt

@@ -1,8 +1,8 @@
 .. laravel-quick-start-view-data:
 
-========================
-View Sample MongoDB Data
-========================
+=================
+View MongoDB Data
+=================
 
 .. facet::
    :name: genre

docs/quick-start/write-data.txt

@@ -1,8 +1,8 @@
 .. _laravel-quick-start-write-data:
 
-=================================
-Post an API Request to Write Data
-=================================
+=====================
+Write Data to MongoDB
+=====================
 
 .. facet::
    :name: genre
@@ -30,10 +30,10 @@ Post an API Request to Write Data
              $movie->save();
          }
 
-   .. step:: Add a Route for the Controller Function
+   .. step:: Add an API Route that Calls the Controller Function
 
-      Add the following API route to map to the ``store()`` method and the
-      corresponding import in the ``routes/api.php`` file:
+      Import the controller and add an API route that calls the ``store()``
+      method in the ``routes/api.php`` file:
 
       .. code-block:: php
 
@@ -49,7 +49,7 @@ Post an API Request to Write Data
    .. step:: Update the Model Fields
 
       Update the ``Movie`` model in the ``app/Models`` directory to
-      specify fields that the ``fill()`` method populates as shown in the
+      specify the fields that the ``fill()`` method populates as shown in the
       following code:
 
       .. code-block:: php
@@ -78,7 +78,8 @@ Post an API Request to Write Data
            "plot": "This movie entry was created by running through the Laravel MongoDB Quick Start tutorial."
          }
 
-      Send the payload to the endpoint by running the following command in your shell:
+      Send the JSON payload to the endpoint as a ``POST`` request by running
+      the following command in your shell:
 
       .. code-block:: bash