PRR fixes

Author: Chris Cho

docs/quick-start/configure-mongodb.txt

@@ -14,7 +14,7 @@ Configure Your MongoDB Connection
 .. procedure::
    :style: connected
 
-   .. step:: Set the Connection String in the Database Configuration
+   .. step:: Set the connection string in the database configuration
 
       Open the ``database.php`` file in the ``config`` directory and
       set the default database connection to ``mongodb`` as shown
@@ -41,7 +41,7 @@ Configure Your MongoDB Connection
 
          // ...
 
-   .. step:: Add the Laravel MongoDB Provider
+   .. step:: Add the Laravel MongoDB provider
 
       Open the ``app.php`` file in the ``config`` directory and
       add the following entry into the ``providers`` array:

docs/quick-start/create-a-connection-string.txt

@@ -20,7 +20,7 @@ manual.
 .. procedure::
    :style: connected
 
-   .. step:: Find your MongoDB Atlas Connection String
+   .. step:: Find your MongoDB Atlas connection string
 
       To retrieve your connection string for the deployment that
       you created in the :ref:`previous step <laravel-quick-start-create-deployment>`,
@@ -31,7 +31,7 @@ manual.
       .. figure:: /includes/figures/atlas_connection_select_cluster.png
          :alt: The connect button in the clusters section of the Atlas UI
 
-      Proceed to the :guilabel:`Connect your application` section and select
+      Proceed to the :guilabel:`Connect your application` section. Select
       "PHP" from the :guilabel:`Driver` selection menu and the version
       that best matches the version you installed from the :guilabel:`Version`
       selection menu.
@@ -41,12 +41,12 @@ manual.
       Deselect the :guilabel:`Include full driver code example` option to view
       the connection string.
 
-   .. step:: Copy your Connection String
+   .. step:: Copy your connection string
 
       Click the button on the right of the connection string to copy it
       to your clipboard.
 
-   .. step:: Update the Placeholders
+   .. step:: Update the placeholders
 
       Paste this connection string into a file in your preferred text editor
       and replace the ``<username>`` and ``<password>`` placeholders with

docs/quick-start/create-a-deployment.txt

@@ -11,26 +11,21 @@ your MongoDB database in the cloud.
 .. procedure::
    :style: connected
 
-   .. step:: Create a Free MongoDB deployment on Atlas
+   .. step:: Create a free MongoDB deployment on Atlas
 
       Complete the :atlas:`Get Started with Atlas </getting-started?tck=docs_driver_laravel>`
       guide to set up a new Atlas account and load sample data into a new free
       tier MongoDB deployment.
 
-   .. step:: Save your Credentials
+   .. step:: Save your credentials
 
       After you create your database user, save that user's
       username and password to a safe location for use in an upcoming step.
 
 After completing these steps, you have a new free tier MongoDB deployment on
 Atlas, database user credentials, and sample data loaded into your database.
 
-.. note::
-
-   If you run into issues on this step, ask for help in the
-   :community-forum:`MongoDB Community Forums <>`
-   or submit feedback by using the :guilabel:`Share Feedback`
-   tab on the right or bottom right side of this page.
+.. include:: /includes/quick-start/troubleshoot.rst
 
 .. button:: Next: Create a Connection String
    :uri: /quick-start/create-a-connection-string/

docs/quick-start/download-and-install.txt

@@ -57,7 +57,7 @@ to a Laravel web application.
 
          Using version ^<version number> for laravel/installer
 
-   .. step:: Create a Laravel Application
+   .. step:: Create a Laravel application
 
       Run the following command to generate a new Laravel web application
       called ``{+quickstart-app-name+}``:
@@ -78,22 +78,22 @@ to a Laravel web application.
 
          New to Laravel? Check out our bootcamp and documentation. Build something amazing!
 
-   .. step:: Add a Laravel Application Encryption Key
+   .. step:: Add a Laravel application encryption key
 
-      Run the following command to add the Laravel application encryption
-      key, which is required to encrypt cookies:
+      Navigate to the application directory you created in the previous step:
 
       .. code-block:: bash
 
-         php artisan key:generate
-
-   .. step:: Add {+odm-short+} to the Dependencies
+         cd {+quickstart-app-name+}
 
-      Navigate to the application directory you created in the previous step:
+      Run the following command to add the Laravel application encryption
+      key, which is required to encrypt cookies:
 
       .. code-block:: bash
 
-         cd {+quickstart-app-name+}
+         php artisan key:generate
+
+   .. step:: Add {+odm-short+} to the dependencies
 
       Run the following command to add the {+odm-short+} dependency to
       your application:

docs/quick-start/view-data.txt

@@ -14,7 +14,7 @@ View MongoDB Data
 .. procedure::
    :style: connected
 
-   .. step:: Create a Model and Controller
+   .. step:: Create a model and controller
 
       Create a model called ``Movie`` to represent data from the sample
       ``movies`` collection in your MongoDB database and the corresponding
@@ -33,7 +33,7 @@ View MongoDB Data
 
          INFO  Controller [app/Http/Controllers/MovieController.php] created successfully.
 
-   .. step:: Edit the Model to use {+odm-short+}
+   .. step:: Edit the model to use {+odm-short+}
 
       Open the ``Movie.php`` model in your ``app/Models`` directory and
       make the following edits:
@@ -56,7 +56,7 @@ View MongoDB Data
              protected $connection = 'mongodb';
          }
 
-   .. step:: Add a Controller Function
+   .. step:: Add a controller function
 
       Open the ``MovieController.php`` file in your ``app/Http/Controllers``
       directory. Replace the ``show()`` function with the
@@ -76,7 +76,7 @@ View MongoDB Data
            ]);
          }
 
-   .. step:: Add a Web Route
+   .. step:: Add a web route
 
       Open the ``web.php`` file in the ``routes`` directory.
       Add an import for the ``MovieController`` and a route called
@@ -91,7 +91,7 @@ View MongoDB Data
 
          Route::get('/browse_movies/', [MovieController::class, 'show']);
 
-   .. step:: Generate a View
+   .. step:: Generate a view
 
       Run the following command from the application root directory
       to create a view that displays movie data:
@@ -137,7 +137,7 @@ View MongoDB Data
          </body>
          </html>
 
-   .. step:: Start your Laravel Application
+   .. step:: Start your Laravel application
 
       Run the following command from the application root directory
       to start your PHP built-in web server:
@@ -155,7 +155,7 @@ View MongoDB Data
 
          Press Ctrl+C to stop the server
 
-   .. step:: View the Movie Data
+   .. step:: View the movie data
 
       Open the URL http://127.0.0.1:8000/browse_movies in your web browser.
       The page shows a list of movies and details about each of them.

docs/quick-start/write-data.txt

@@ -87,7 +87,7 @@ Write Data to MongoDB
 
    .. step:: View the Data
 
-      Open ``http://127.0.0.1:8000/browse_movies`` in your web browser to view
+      Open http://127.0.0.1:8000/browse_movies in your web browser to view
       the movie information that you submitted. The inserted movie appears at
       the top of the results.