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Co-authored-by: Sayan Chowdhury <sayan.chowdhury2012@gmail.com>

Author: kernel-kun

releases/release-1.35/release-notes/maps/pr-123642-map.yaml

@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
 pr: 123642
 releasenote:
   text: |-
-    The JWT authenticator in `kube-apiserver` now reports the following metrics when the `StructuredAuthenticationConfiguration` feature gate has now been enabled:
+    The JWT authenticator in `kube-apiserver` now reports the following metrics when the `StructuredAuthenticationConfiguration` feature gate is enabled:
     - `apiserver_authentication_jwt_authenticator_jwks_fetch_last_timestamp_seconds`
     - `apiserver_authentication_jwt_authenticator_jwks_fetch_last_key_set_info`.
 pr_body: ""

releases/release-1.35/release-notes/maps/pr-133511-map.yaml

@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 pr: 133511
 releasenote:
-  text: Eliminated and prevented future use of `md5` in favor of more appropriate
+  text: Eliminated and prevented future use of the `md5` algorithm in favor of more appropriate
     hashing algorithms.
 pr_body: ""

releases/release-1.35/release-notes/maps/pr-134624-map.yaml

@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
 pr: 134624
 releasenote:
   text: The Pod Certificates feature moved to beta. The `PodCertificateRequest` feature
-    gate is set disabled by default. To use the feature, user must enable the certificates
+    gate is set disabled by default. To use the feature, users must enable the certificates
     API groups in `v1beta1` and enable the `PodCertificateRequest` feature gate. The
     `UserAnnotations` field was added to the `PodCertificateProjection` API and the
     corresponding `UnverifiedUserAnnotations` field was added to the `PodCertificateRequest`

releases/release-1.35/release-notes/maps/pr-134744-map.yaml

@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
 pr: 134744
 releasenote:
   text: |-
-    ACTION REQUIRED
+    ACTION REQUIRED:
 
     vendor: Updated `k8s.io/system-validators` to `v1.12.1`. The cgroups validator now throws an error instead of a warning if cgroups v1 is detected on the host and the provided KubeletVersion is `v1.35` or newer.
 

releases/release-1.35/release-notes/maps/pr-135080-map.yaml

@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 pr: 135080
 releasenote:
   text: Promoted the `JobManagedBy` feature to general availability. The `JobManagedBy`
-    feature gate was locked to `true` and will be removed in a future release of Kubernetes.
+    feature gate was locked to `true` and will be removed in a future Kubernetes release.
 pr_body: ""