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Co-authored-by: Anshuman Tripathi <anshuman.tripathi305@gmail.com>

Author: kernel-kun

releases/release-1.35/release-notes/maps/pr-123642-map.yaml

@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
 pr: 123642
 releasenote:
   text: |-
-    The JWT authenticator in `kube-apiserver` now reports the following metrics when the `StructuredAuthenticationConfiguration` feature gate is enabled:
+    The JWT authenticator in `kube-apiserver` now reports the following metrics when the `StructuredAuthenticationConfiguration` feature gate has now been enabled:
     - `apiserver_authentication_jwt_authenticator_jwks_fetch_last_timestamp_seconds`
     - `apiserver_authentication_jwt_authenticator_jwks_fetch_last_key_set_info`.
 pr_body: ""

releases/release-1.35/release-notes/maps/pr-134263-map.yaml

@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 pr: 134263
 releasenote:
-  text: The namespace is now included in the `--dry-run=client` output for `HorizontalPodAutoscaler
+  text: Namespace is now included in the `--dry-run=client` output for `HorizontalPodAutoscaler
     (HPA)` objects.
 pr_body: ""

releases/release-1.35/release-notes/maps/pr-134624-map.yaml

@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
 pr: 134624
 releasenote:
   text: The Pod Certificates feature moved to beta. The `PodCertificateRequest` feature
-    gate is set `false` by default. To use the feature, user must enable the certificates
+    gate is set disabled by default. To use the feature, user must enable the certificates
     API groups in `v1beta1` and enable the `PodCertificateRequest` feature gate. The
     `UserAnnotations` field was added to the `PodCertificateProjection` API and the
     corresponding `UnverifiedUserAnnotations` field was added to the `PodCertificateRequest`

releases/release-1.35/release-notes/maps/pr-134691-map.yaml

@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 pr: 134691
 releasenote:
-  text: The `SystemdWatchdog` feature gate is locked to default and will be removed
+  text: The `SystemdWatchdog` feature gate has been locked to default and will be removed
     in future release. The systemd watchdog functionality in `kubelet` can be enabled
     via systemd without any feature gate configuration. See the [systemd watchdog
     documentation](https://kubernetes.io/docs/reference/node/systemd-watchdog/) for

releases/release-1.35/release-notes/maps/pr-134746-map.yaml

@@ -2,6 +2,6 @@ pr: 134746
 releasenote:
   text: Added the `ChangeContainerStatusOnKubeletRestart` feature gate, which defaults
     to disabled. When the feature gate is disabled, `kubelet` does not change the
-    Pod status upon restart, and Pods do not re-run startup probes after `kubelet`
-    restart.
+    Pod status upon restart, and Pods do not re-run startup probes after the `kubelet`
+    restarts.
 pr_body: ""

releases/release-1.35/release-notes/maps/pr-134769-map.yaml

@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 pr: 134769
 releasenote:
   text: |-
-    Fixed a bug where Job status updates failed after resuming a Job that was previously started and suspended.
+    Fixed a bug where Job status updates fail after resuming a Job that was previously started and suspended.
     The error message was: `status.startTime: Required value: startTime cannot be removed for unsuspended job`.
 pr_body: ""

releases/release-1.35/release-notes/maps/pr-134948-map.yaml

@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
 pr: 134948
 releasenote:
-  text: Promoted `PodObservedGenerationTracking` to general availability.
+  text: Promoted `PodObservedGenerationTracking` to GA.
 pr_body: ""

releases/release-1.35/release-notes/maps/pr-134949-map.yaml

@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
 pr: 134949
 releasenote:
-  text: Promoted `InPlacePodVerticalScaling` to general availability.
+  text: Promoted `InPlacePodVerticalScaling` to GA.
 pr_body: ""