fix some links and edit talks copy

Author: tfidfwastaken

src/cljs/inclojure_website/data.cljs

@@ -98,9 +98,9 @@ Bangalore-Clojure meetup group."}])
           Beyond the realm of technology, he embraces his inner creativity as an
           amateur doodler and a habitual storyteller. A pop culture aficionado at
           heart, he finds inspiration in the narratives of both code and culture."
-    :talk-summary "Explore the evolution of polymorphism as an idea, tracing its
+    :talk-summary "This talk explores the evolution of polymorphism as an idea, tracing its
                    origins and key historical influences, to understand the design decisions
-                   and significance of Clojure's offering"}
+                   and significance of Clojure's offering."}
    {:name "Vedang Manerikar"
     :talk-title "Developer Tooling for Speed and Productivity in 2024"
     :github ""
@@ -121,7 +121,7 @@ Bangalore-Clojure meetup group."}])
     :avatar "images/speakers/aldo.jpg"
     :bio "Aldo Sujin is a Software engineer at Formcept. With the knowledge in Clojure and
           regular expressions, he has implemented the PII annotation in Clojure as one of the
-          core plug-ins for the data processing engine of FORMCEPT’s MECBot product. Reach out to know about Clojure, Formcept and MECBot."
+          core plug-ins for the data processing engine of FORMCEPT’s MECBot product."
     :talk-summary "With the digitalization of anything and everything, PII detection is a recent topic of attention. This talk will cover
                    how to detect PII with Clojure, the challenges involved and how one can overcome these challenges."}
    {:name "Akshat Shah"
@@ -156,7 +156,7 @@ Bangalore-Clojure meetup group."}])
                    ecosystem can provide. "}
    {:name "Abhinav Sarkar"
     :talk-title "Functional Programming Patterns"
-    :github "https://abhinavsarkar.net/"
+    :github "https://github.com/abhin4v"
     :masto "https://fantastic.earth/@abnv"
     :www "https://abhinavsarkar.net/"
     :avatar "images/speakers/abhinav.jpg"
@@ -167,7 +167,7 @@ Bangalore-Clojure meetup group."}])
     :talk-summary "I've been writing Clojure and other functional programming
                    languages professionally for nearly a decade now. I've noticed that while
                    people understand the basics of FP, they find it hard to apply FP at large.
-                   In this session, I'll talk about some useful patterns that make applying FP
+                   In this session, I'll talk about some useful patterns that make applying FP.
     easier at large."}
    {:name "Dheeraj Kumar"
     :talk-title "Exploring Electric Clojure"

src/cljs/inclojure_website/page.cljs

@@ -494,7 +494,7 @@
         [:img.speakers.article-image.location
          {:src avatar}]]
        [:h4 talk-title]
-       [:p.article-subtitle "By " [:a {:href (or www twitter masto github)} name]]
+       [:p.article-subtitle "By " [:a {:href (or www masto twitter github)} name]]
        [:p.article-subtitle [:strong "About the talk"] ": " talk-summary]
        (when (not-empty bio) [:p.article-subtitle [:strong "About the speaker"] ": " bio])
        [:div.article-fine-print.no-mobile
@@ -505,9 +505,9 @@
           (not-empty masto) [:a
                              {:href masto}
                              [:img {:alt "Mastodon", :src "images/mastodon.ico"}]])
-        [:a
-         {:href github}
-         [:img {:alt "Github", :src "images/github.png"}]]]])]])
+        (when (not-empty github) [:a
+                                  {:href github}
+                                  [:img {:alt "Github", :src "images/github.png"}]])]])]])
 
 (defn ending-ornament []
   [:section {:id "ornament"}