Update content/vault/v1.20.x/content/docs/secrets/ldap.mdx

Co-authored-by: Sarah Chavis <62406755+schavis@users.noreply.github.com>

Author: kpcraig

content/vault/v1.20.x/content/docs/secrets/ldap.mdx

@@ -196,9 +196,9 @@ role, the response will include the time before the next rotation (`ttl`).
 The `binddn` account used by Vault should be rotated using the `rotate-root` endpoint to generate a password
 only Vault will know.
 
-Similar to the rotation manager, rotations will be logged with reference to the
-`name` of the role and `error` if failed. They will also indicate that they were rotated in
-a `periodic function`.
+As with the rotation manager, Vault logs rotations with reference to the
+`name` of the role and `error` if the rotation failed. The logs also indicate
+ if the rotation was part of a `periodic function`.
 
 ### Manual rotation