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Author: hellobontempo

content/vault/v1.21.x/content/docs/updates/important-changes.mdx

@@ -92,10 +92,8 @@ filters you have two options:
 
 #### Issue
 
-Users cannot list KV v2 secrets in the GUI if their policy grants `list` access to metadata 
-but the policy path does not include a trailing slash.
-
-Example of a policy that previously granted users list access and now returns an error:
+Users cannot list KV v2 secrets in the GUI when the policy granting `list`
+access to metadata does not include a trailing slash. For example:
 
 ```
 path "secret/metadata/:path" {   
@@ -105,21 +103,23 @@ path "secret/metadata/:path" {
 
 #### Workaround
 
-To resolve the policy issue, add a trailing slash to the policy path until the fix is released:
+Option 1: Use the API explorer to list KV v2 secrets instead of the KV v2 GUI page:
+
+1. Select **Tools** from the Vault GUI sidebar.
+1. Click **API Explorer**.
+1. Enter the KV v2 plugin mount path in the "Filter by tag" search bar.
+1. Expand the `GET /:mount/metadata/{path}/` endpoint and click **Try it out**.
+1. Input the secret `path` click **Execute** to perform the HTTP request.
+
+Option 2: Add a trailing slash to the policy path:
 
 ```
 path "secret/metadata/:path/" {   
   capabilities = ["list"] 
 }
 ```
 
-You can also use the API explorer to list KV v2 secrets:
 
-1. Select **Tools** from the Vault GUI sidebar.
-1. Click **API Explorer**.
-1. Enter the KV v2 plugin mount path in the "Filter by tag" search bar.
-1. Expand the `GET /:mount/metadata/{path}/` endpoint and click **Try it out**.
-1. Input the secret `path` click **Execute** to perform the HTTP request.
 
 ### GUI KV v2 listing secrets fails in namespaces ((#gui-kvv2-list-namespaces)) <EnterpriseAlert inline="true" />
 
@@ -129,12 +129,12 @@ You can also use the API explorer to list KV v2 secrets:
 
 #### Issue
 
-The GUI displays a "No secrets yet" message for KV v2 engines with existing secrets when
-users navigate to the list secrets in a namespace.
+The GUI displays "No secrets yet" message for KV v2 engines with existing secrets when
+users navigate to the plugins secret list in a namespace.
 
 #### Workaround
 
-You can use the web REPL to list KV v2 secrets:
+Use the CLI emulator to list KV v2 secrets:
 
 1. Navigate to the desired namespace.
 1. Toggle open the web REPL.