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Author: essercodes

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 My name is Max Esser, I’m IT Manager and Software Developer in Madison WI. As a
 technology enthusiast I love working with computers. Working in tech has given
-me the opportunity to help people by finding solutions to their problems; all
-while exploring my lifelong passion for technology. I pride myself on my ability
-to reach proficiency with new skills and technologies quickly. In my free time
+me the opportunity to help people by finding solutions to their problems and
+explore my lifelong passion for technology. I pride myself on my ability to
+reach proficiency with new skills and technologies quickly. In my free time
 you’ll probably find me working on personal projects, catching live music,
 traveling, or just playing D\&D with my two cats.
 
 ## My Story
 
-Since 2013 it has been my pleasure to work in the IT Department of a small
+Since 2013 it has been my pleasure to work in the IT department of a small
 transportation cooperative based out of Madison WI. Starting as an IT Assistant
-in Technical Support I worked my way up to IT Manager, *the highest roll in all
-the land*. Over the years my title changed, but I have always worked in a small
-team with a variety of responsibilities. This afforded me the opportunity to
-work in many different spaces and gain experience with support, networking,
-cloud, security, management, and much more. However, my favorite space by far is
-software development. It’s why in 2019 I decided to go back to school part-time
-with a goal of getting a Computer Science degree. In 2021, I transferred to the
-University of Wisconsin-Madison where I started taking classes full-time, all
-while continuing to work in IT. My educational experience at UW-Madison was
-wonderful and challenging, it was exactly the next step I’d been seeking. I’m
-proud to say that in 2024 I completed a double major in Computer Science and
-Data Science. I'm looking forward to the opportunity to apply my experience to
-Software Development focused roles as I continue to grow.
+doing technical support I worked my way up to the position of IT Manager, *the
+highest roll in all the land*. Over the years my title changed, but I have
+always worked in a small team with a variety of responsibilities. This afforded
+me the opportunity to work in many different spaces and gain experience with
+support, networking, cloud, security, management, and much more. However, my
+favorite space by far is software development. It’s why in 2019 I decided to go
+back to school part-time with a goal of getting a Computer Science degree. In
+2021, I transferred to the University of Wisconsin-Madison where I started
+taking classes full-time. My education at UW-Madison was wonderful and
+challenging, it was exactly the next step I’d been seeking. I’m proud to say
+that in 2024 I completed a double major in Computer Science and Data Science.
+I'm looking forward to opportunities where I can apply my experience to Software
+Development focused roles as I continue to grow.