Reword a few sentences

Author: zacdezgeo

docs/src/overrides/home.html

@@ -192,16 +192,16 @@ <h2>Download and Deploy</h2>
                         <img src="../img/ingestdata.png" alt="Ingest your data" loading="lazy" />
                         <figcaption class="md-typeset">
                             <h2>Ingest Data & Metadata</h2>
-                            <p>Whether you're working with raster or vector data, eoAPI's flexible design allows you to
-                                easily ingest STAC Collections.
+                            <p>Whether working with raster or vector data, eoAPI's flexible design allows you to
+                                ingest STAC Collections quickly.
                             </p>
                         </figcaption>
                     </figure>
                     <figure>
                         <img src="../img/sharevisualize.png" alt="Share imagery" loading="lazy">
                         <figcaption class="md-typeset">
                             <h2>Share, Visualize, and Analyze</h2>
-                            <p>Now that your data is ingested, eoAPI provides you with the tools you need to share,
+                            <p>Now that your data is ingested, eoAPI provides the tools to share,
                                 visualize, and analyze it. From simple sharing options to advanced analytics
                                 capabilities, eoAPI is designed to help you make the most out of your geospatial data.
                             </p>
@@ -227,7 +227,7 @@ <h1><mark>We believe</mark> that the <mark>community</mark> of people who would
                 </header>
                 <p class="md-typeset">The potential of Earth Observation data is immense in helping us understand our
                     ever-changing planet. To fulfill this potential, we must provide EO data that can be easily
-                    integrated into modern applications and decision-making tools. It&apos;s important that it&apos;s easy to
+                    integrated into modern applications and decision-making tools. It&apos;s crucial that it&apos;s easy to
                     discover, interoperable, ingestible, and optimized for applications. This is a significant challenge
                     for many organizations, and our mission at Development Seed is to address this challenge.</p>
             </div>