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flyby copy feedback #281

@jgravois

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@jgravois

a couple small nits i noticed for possible consideration next time we have 💅 cycles to spare

  1. was the intention for the sentence below to say 'believe in'?

    <span class="text-white">We’re a small team of remote workers who believe and advocate for better public services</span>

  2. it could just be me, but something feels amiss at the end of this sentence too:

    outcome: Successfully relaunched Data + Donuts in person after the pandemic in June 2023. We have been hosting events ever since and livestreaming them for a larger audience for those who don’t want to attend in person.

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