update OSS page

Author: Thomas Stromberg

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           <p style="margin: 0 0 10px 0; font-size: 24px; font-weight: 700; color: #333;">FREE FOR OPEN SOURCE PROJECTS. FOREVER.</p>
-          <p style="margin: 0; font-size: 16px; line-height: 1.5; color: #333;">We believe in giving back to the community that created us. If your project is open source, our tools are free forever! We're such fans of open-source that we reserve 10% of our profit to sponsoring projects we like and use.</p>
+          <p style="margin: 0; font-size: 16px; line-height: 1.5; color: #333;">Open source built the tech stack you use daily. We make it faster to maintain. If your project is open source, our tools are free forever—and we reinvest 10% of revenue into the OSS projects in our own stack.</p>
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       <h2 style="margin-top: 0;">WHY WE DO THIS</h2>
-      <p style="margin: 0 0 10px 0;">Open source maintainers already donate their time. The least we can do is make their workflows faster.</p>
+      <p style="margin: 0 0 10px 0;">You're already donating your time. We eliminate the context-switching overhead that kills your flow state—so you can spend more time shipping code, less time chasing PR status.</p>
       <p style="margin: 0;">We proudly donate to and support open-source projects such as: <a href="https://projectbluefin.io/">Bluefin Linux</a>, <a href="https://freebsd.org/">FreeBSD</a>, <a href="https://ghostbsd.org/">GhostBSD</a>, <a href="https://github.com/golangci/golangci-lint">golangci-lint</a>, <a href="https://www.netbsd.org/">NetBSD</a>, and <a href="https://osuosl.org/">OSU Open Source Lab</a>.</p>
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       <h2 style="margin-top: 0;">OUR PROJECTS</h2>
 
-      <p><strong style="color: var(--yellow);">Ready to Review</strong> — Turn-based PR tracking. Know whose turn it is, every time. <a href="https://github.com/codeGROOVE-dev/ready-to-review">View on GitHub →</a></p>
+      <p><strong style="color: var(--yellow);">Ready to Review</strong> — Picks the best reviewer based on who's actually active and recently touched the code. Eliminates "who's blocking this PR?" context hunts with turn-based tracking that shows exactly who needs to act. <a href="https://github.com/codeGROOVE-dev/ready-to-review">View on GitHub →</a></p>
 
-      <p><strong style="color: var(--yellow);">Goose</strong> — PR tracker that honks when you're the bottleneck. <a href="https://github.com/codeGROOVE-dev/goose">View on GitHub →</a></p>
+      <p><strong style="color: var(--yellow);">Goose</strong> — Auto-detects when PRs are stalled on you. Cuts PR cycle time without micromanagement. <a href="https://github.com/codeGROOVE-dev/goose">View on GitHub →</a></p>
 
       <p style="margin-bottom: 0;">Explore all our open source work at <a href="https://github.com/orgs/codeGROOVE-dev/repositories">github.com/codeGROOVE-dev</a></p>
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     <h2>GET STARTED</h2>
-    <p>Sign up at <a href="https://dash.ready-to-review.dev">dash.ready-to-review.dev</a> with your GitHub account.</p>
+    <p>30-second setup. Connect your GitHub repos at <a href="https://dash.ready-to-review.dev">dash.ready-to-review.dev</a>—no code changes required.</p>
     <p>Questions? <a href="mailto:go-faster@codegroove.dev">go-faster@codegroove.dev</a></p>
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