iterating on blog feedback

Author: Madhur prashant

blog_post.html

@@ -3209,7 +3209,7 @@ <h4 class="anchored" data-anchor-id="amazon-vpc-network-configurations"><a href=
 </section>
 <section id="iam-role" class="level4">
 <h4 class="anchored" data-anchor-id="iam-role">IAM Role</h4>
-<p>Set up an execution role in <a href="https://aws.amazon.com/iam/">AWS Identity and Access Management (IAM)</a> with appropriate permissions to allow SageMaker to access <a href="https://docs.aws.amazon.com/secretsmanager/latest/userguide/intro.html">AWS Secrets Manager</a>, S3, and other services within your AWS account. <strong><em>Until an AWS CloudFormation template is provided that creates the role with the requisite IAM permissions, use a SageMaker execution role that AmazonSageMakerFullAccess AWS managed policy for your execution role.</em></strong> Follow the instructions <a href="https://github.com/aws-samples/amazon-sagemaker-w-snowflake-as-datasource/tree/main/iam">here</a> to create permissions for your <code>iam</code> roles.</p>
+<p>Set up an execution role in <a href="https://aws.amazon.com/iam/">AWS Identity and Access Management (IAM)</a> with appropriate permissions to allow SageMaker to access <a href="https://docs.aws.amazon.com/secretsmanager/latest/userguide/intro.html">AWS Secrets Manager</a> and S3. <strong><em>Until an AWS CloudFormation template is provided that creates the role with the requisite IAM permissions, use a SageMaker execution role that AmazonSageMakerFullAccess AWS managed policy for your execution role.</em></strong></p>
 </section>
 <section id="aws-secrets-manager" class="level4">
 <h4 class="anchored" data-anchor-id="aws-secrets-manager">AWS Secrets Manager</h4>

blog_post.md

@@ -299,14 +299,11 @@ network_config:
 Set up an execution role in [AWS Identity and Access Management
 (IAM)](https://aws.amazon.com/iam/) with appropriate permissions to
 allow SageMaker to access [AWS Secrets
-Manager](https://docs.aws.amazon.com/secretsmanager/latest/userguide/intro.html),
-S3, and other services within your AWS account. ***Until an AWS
-CloudFormation template is provided that creates the role with the
-requisite IAM permissions, use a SageMaker execution role that
-AmazonSageMakerFullAccess AWS managed policy for your execution role.***
-Follow the instructions
-[here](https://github.com/aws-samples/amazon-sagemaker-w-snowflake-as-datasource/tree/main/iam)
-to create permissions for your `iam` roles.
+Manager](https://docs.aws.amazon.com/secretsmanager/latest/userguide/intro.html)
+and S3. ***Until an AWS CloudFormation template is provided that creates
+the role with the requisite IAM permissions, use a SageMaker execution
+role that AmazonSageMakerFullAccess AWS managed policy for your
+execution role.***
 
 #### AWS Secrets Manager
 

blog_post.qmd

@@ -149,7 +149,7 @@ network_config:
 
 #### IAM Role
 
-Set up an execution role in [AWS Identity and Access Management (IAM)](https://aws.amazon.com/iam/) with appropriate permissions to allow SageMaker to access [AWS Secrets Manager](https://docs.aws.amazon.com/secretsmanager/latest/userguide/intro.html), S3, and other services within your AWS account. ***Until an AWS CloudFormation template is provided that creates the role with the requisite IAM permissions, use a SageMaker execution role that AmazonSageMakerFullAccess AWS managed policy for your execution role.*** Follow the instructions [here](https://github.com/aws-samples/amazon-sagemaker-w-snowflake-as-datasource/tree/main/iam) to create permissions for your `iam` roles.
+Set up an execution role in [AWS Identity and Access Management (IAM)](https://aws.amazon.com/iam/) with appropriate permissions to allow SageMaker to access [AWS Secrets Manager](https://docs.aws.amazon.com/secretsmanager/latest/userguide/intro.html) and S3. ***Until an AWS CloudFormation template is provided that creates the role with the requisite IAM permissions, use a SageMaker execution role that AmazonSageMakerFullAccess AWS managed policy for your execution role.***
 
 #### AWS Secrets Manager