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<h2>What is version control?</h2>
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<p class="fragment">System that records changes to a set of files over time</p>
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<p class="fragment">System that records changes made to a set of files over time</p>
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<p class="fragment">These systems are called VCS (Version Control Systems)</p>
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<p class="fragment">They are essential for a development project with several people</p>
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<p class="fragment">They are essential to programming projects involving several people</p>
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<h2>What can we do with that?</h2>
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<p class="fragment">Keep every version of a file (source code, image...)</p>
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<p class="fragment">Work easily with several developers</p>
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<p class="fragment">Work easily with several programmers</p>
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<p class="fragment">Revert files back to a previous state</p>
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<p class="fragment">Compare changes over time</p>
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<p class="fragment">And much more...</p>
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<h2>Distributed VCS</h2>
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<p class="fragment">Full local copy of the remote repository</p>
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<p class="fragment">Can deal with several remote repositories</p>
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<p class="fragment">Several types of workflow</p>
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<p class="fragment">Several types of workflows</p>
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<p class="fragment">Examples: <a href="http://www.git-scm.com">Git</a>, <a href="https://www.mercurial-scm.org/">Mercurial</a></p>
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<h2>Why using Git?</h2>
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<p class="fragment">It's fast</p>
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<p class="fragment">Strong support of non-linear development</p>
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<p class="fragment">Strong support of non-linear workflows</p>
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<p class="fragment">Ables to handle large projects efficiently</p>
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<p class="fragment">Most VCS used these days</p>
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<p class="fragment">Free and open-source</p>
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<p class="fragment">Most used VCS these days</p>
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<p class="fragment">Free and open source</p>
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git clone git@github.com:docker/docker.git
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<p>The above command-line will clone the official repository of the <a href="https://www.docker.com/">Docker</a> project</p>
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<p>The above command line will clone the official repository of the <a href="https://www.docker.com/">Docker</a> project</p>
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<h2>Git basics</h2>
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<p>To add files to be tracked:</p>
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<p>To track new files:</p>
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<h2>Different workflows</h2>
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<p>Centralised</p>
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<p>Integration-manager</p>
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<p>Integration manager</p>
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<p>Dictator and lieutenant</p>
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<h2>Integration-manager</h2>
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<h2>Integration manager</h2>
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<img src="img/integration-manager.png" alt="Integration-manager workflow">
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<figcaption style="font-style: italic; font-size: .5em">Integration-manager workflow - Reference: <a href="http://git-scm.com/book/en/v2">Pro Git, 2nd edition</a></figcaption>
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<h2>Self-hosted servers</h2>
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<p class="fragment">Examples: <a href="https://about.gitlab.com/">GitLab</a>, <a href="https://gogs.io/">Gogs</a></p>
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<p class="fragment">Better choice for your confidential works</p>
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<p class="fragment">Better choice if your work is confidential</p>
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