Merge pull request #2385 from NCCE/3026-updates-to-activities

Community Activity Update

Author: msquance-stem

db/seeds/activities/community.rb

@@ -317,21 +317,22 @@
 end.save!
 
 Activity.find_or_initialize_by(slug: "implement-your-professional-development-in-the-classroom-and-evaluate-via-the-impact-toolkit").tap do |activity|
-  activity.title = "Implement your professional development in the classroom and evaluate through our Impact Toolkit"
-  activity.title = "Implement your professional development in the classroom and evaluate through our Impact Toolkit"
+  activity.title = "Implement and evaluate your professional development in the classroom"
   activity.credit = 10
   activity.slug = "implement-your-professional-development-in-the-classroom-and-evaluate-via-the-impact-toolkit"
   activity.category = "community"
   activity.provider = "stem-learning"
   activity.self_certifiable = true
-  activity.description = "Think about not only your actions but also <a href='#{impact_toolkit_url}'>collecting evidence</a> of how the changes you make impact you, your colleagues, and your students."
-  activity.public_copy_description = "Think about not only your actions but also <a href='#{impact_toolkit_url}'>collecting evidence</a> of how the changes you make impact you, your colleagues, and your students."
+  activity.description = "Think not only about your actions but also about <a href='https://www.stem.org.uk/about-us/impact-and-evaluation/impact-toolkit'>collecting evidence</a> of how the changes you make impact you, your colleagues, and your students."
+  activity.public_copy_description = "Think not only about your actions but also about <a href='https://www.stem.org.uk/about-us/impact-and-evaluation/impact-toolkit'>collecting evidence</a> of how the changes you make impact you, your colleagues, and your students."
   activity.public_copy_title_url = impact_toolkit_url
   activity.self_verification_info = nil
   activity.public_copy_evidence = [{
     brief: "Evidence guidance:",
     bullets: [
-      "Add information on how you’ve implemented what you learnt from CPD into your classroom and how you used the Impact Toolkit to evaluate your learning."
+      "Add information on how you’ve implemented what you’ve learnt from CPD into your classroom.",
+      "Explain how the changes you made have impacted you, your colleagues, and your students.",
+      "If you applied knowledge from a residential course, explain how you used the <a href='https://www.stem.org.uk/about-us/impact-and-evaluation/impact-toolkit'>Impact Toolkit</a> to evaluate your learning. For some courses you may also be asked to make an action plan and reflect on the impact of your CPD after the course."
     ]
   }]
 end.save!
@@ -889,8 +890,8 @@
   activity.category = "community"
   activity.provider = "stem-learning"
   activity.self_certifiable = true
-  activity.description = "Lead your school, and others, in creating the right conditions for more girls to succeed in computing. Become an <a href='/i-belong'>I Belong Champion</a> to showcase your passion for inclusion and advocate for and create a sense of belonging for girls in computer science. Complete the <a href='https://teachcomputing.org/courses/CO440/encouraging-girls-into-computer-science-online'>‘Encouraging girls into GCSE computer science’</a> course, learn about the whole <a href='/i-belong'>programme</a> and become a Champion... then encourage more people to join the mission!"
-  activity.public_copy_description = "Lead your school, and others, in creating the right conditions for more girls to succeed in computing. Become an <a href='/i-belong'>I Belong Champion</a> to showcase your passion for inclusion and advocate for and create a sense of belonging for girls in computer science. Complete the <a href='https://teachcomputing.org/courses/CO440/encouraging-girls-into-computer-science-online'>‘Encouraging girls into GCSE computer science’</a> course, learn about the whole <a href='/i-belong'>programme</a> and become a Champion... then encourage more people to join the mission!"
+  activity.description = "Lead your school, and others, in creating the right conditions for more girls to succeed in computing. Become an <a href='https://teachcomputing.org/i-belong'>I Belong Champion</a> to showcase your passion for inclusion and advocate for and create a sense of belonging for girls in computer science. Complete the <a href='https://teachcomputing.org/courses/CO440/encouraging-girls-into-computer-science-online'>‘Encouraging girls into GCSE computer science’</a> course, learn about the whole <a href='https://teachcomputing.org/i-belong'>programme</a> and encourage more people to join the mission!"
+  activity.public_copy_description = "Lead your school, and others, in creating the right conditions for more girls to succeed in computing. Become an <a href='https://teachcomputing.org/i-belong'>I Belong Champion</a> to showcase your passion for inclusion and advocate for and create a sense of belonging for girls in computer science. Complete the <a href='https://teachcomputing.org/courses/CO440/encouraging-girls-into-computer-science-online'>‘Encouraging girls into GCSE computer science’</a> course, learn about the whole <a href='https://teachcomputing.org/i-belong'>programme</a> and encourage more people to join the mission!"
   activity.public_copy_title_url = "https://teachcomputing.org/i-belong"
   activity.self_verification_info = nil
   activity.public_copy_evidence = [{
@@ -911,8 +912,8 @@
   activity.category = "community"
   activity.provider = "stem-learning"
   activity.self_certifiable = true
-  activity.description = "Lead your school, and others, in creating the right conditions for more girls to succeed in computing. Become an <a href='/i-belong'>I Belong Champion</a> to showcase your passion for inclusion and advocate for and create a sense of belonging for girls in computer science. Complete the <a href='https://teachcomputing.org/courses/CO409/empowering-girls-in-key-stage-2-computing-online'>Empowering girls in key stage 2 computing</a> course, learn about the whole programme and become a Champion... then encourage more people to join the mission!"
-  activity.public_copy_description = "Lead your school, and others, in creating the right conditions for more girls to succeed in computing. Become an <a href='/i-belong'>I Belong Champion</a> to showcase your passion for inclusion and advocate for and create a sense of belonging for girls in computer science. Complete the <a href='https://teachcomputing.org/courses/CO409/empowering-girls-in-key-stage-2-computing-online'>Empowering girls in key stage 2 computing</a> course, learn about the whole programme and become a Champion... then encourage more people to join the mission!"
+  activity.description = "Lead your school, and others, in creating the right conditions for more girls to succeed in computing. Become an <a href='https://teachcomputing.org/i-belong'>I Belong Champion</a> to showcase your passion for inclusion and advocate for and create a sense of belonging for girls in computer science. Complete the <a href='https://teachcomputing.org/courses/CO409/empowering-girls-in-key-stage-2-computing-online'>Empowering girls in key stage 2 computing</a> course, learn about the whole <a href='https://teachcomputing.org/i-belong'>programme</a> and encourage more people to join the mission!"
+  activity.public_copy_description = "Lead your school, and others, in creating the right conditions for more girls to succeed in computing. Become an <a href='https://teachcomputing.org/i-belong'>I Belong Champion</a> to showcase your passion for inclusion and advocate for and create a sense of belonging for girls in computer science. Complete the <a href='https://teachcomputing.org/courses/CO409/empowering-girls-in-key-stage-2-computing-online'>Empowering girls in key stage 2 computing</a> course, learn about the whole <a href='https://teachcomputing.org/i-belong'>programme</a> and encourage more people to join the mission!"
   activity.public_copy_title_url = "https://teachcomputing.org/i-belong"
   activity.self_verification_info = nil
   activity.public_copy_evidence = [{