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 ## Why should you care?
-__InEngine.NET__ is a set of .NET packages that allows for the creation of a code-centric data integration and asynchronous job scheduling server.
+__InEngine.NET__ is a set of .NET packages that allow for the creation of a code-centric data integration and asynchronous job scheduling server.
 Integration jobs are created in code, making them flexible and testable.
 
 Existing commercial data integration server products do not work in a way software developers are comfortable with.
 They provide a drag-and-drop GUI application for implementing a data integration.
 This sounds appealing, but such GUIs are often clunky and slow.
-Additionally, such products do not provide a testable way to build integrations and detect when they stop functioning.
-This is a major issue as data integrations are fragile by nature.
+Additionally, such products do not provide a testable way to build integrations and detect why they stop functioning.
+This is a serious issue as data integrations are fragile by nature.
 
 In contrast, a developer would prefer fine-grained, programmatic access to the data they are querying, transforming, and persisting.
 A developer would also like to be able to test their integrations to ensure their continued operation.